Friday, April 1, 2011

Take a look at my first chapter please? =)?

Honestly it is boring. I read the first three characters and I got bored. I also thought that she was a teenager until I read she had a husband. The first chapter should start of with a bang. It should have the reader to hooked to find out whats next? It should leave them with a question(s) they want answered. Wheres the action? The suspense? The hook?

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